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[流域风] 【陈皮皮的斗争】 三十七

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2012-2-7 15:13  显示全部帖子
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前面的铺垫别有情趣，场景构造中皮皮的定位已经明了，调皮聪明的性格与母子间暧昧的对话引人遐思，看来即使进入肉戏后也不会出现令人腻烦的性爱描写，关键是楼主的文字驾驭能力与心理刻画更重精神层面。好文，期待更好！

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